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Inconsequential Sequential 1-2by ~Bankasha

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Part one (pages 1 and 2) of a 4 page comic scene.
Link to part two: [link]

This is my first real crack at sequential art, first I put my, well it's not skill, yet, my effort into.
This wont make a whole lot of sense to, anybody. But what this was really about was to test some techniques.

I know sequentially its not perfect either, thanks to some advice from

from ages back, when I made this, 3 months or more I'd say (I can be quite slow with my submitting) I now know the 4th page should have been first, but oh well

thats why there are next times.

Anyway, thanks for looking

ps. the man in panel four on page one was reffed from [link] by

seriously thanks, I just couldn't get that angle right.

*RLDStock Apr 10, 2009

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~Rabadenzo Feb 26, 2009 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

I really like the way you did the shadows, but you gave yourself a weird angle of light in the frames, you could've made it easier, for harder isn't always better. Although in this case, it was a pretty good way of adding depth to the images.
You could've made the shadows a bit harsher, darker.

Also, some backgrounds are too simple and I can't see the scenery they're in, wich is a shame because it usually gives a bit more story, an slight amount of emotion and gives an idea of the where and when of the scene. Like the clothes.

These comics make me think of detective stories.

~grafmason Feb 17, 2009

keep it coming.

*RLDStock Feb 17, 2009

Im so very glad one of my images came in handy... especially one that wasn't so great, if you ever need a specific pose I can certainly attempt it for you in the future.. just let me know!

~Bankasha Feb 18, 2009

Thanks again ^^ that ref was a life saver!

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